21 July 2007

COME (by Makhosazana Xaba)



Come, I want to sit on your lap
with my legs around your waist.
In a basket: beads, combs, oil, and shells,
so I can play with your hair.

I want to massage your scalp with oil until my fingertips feel it come alive.

With the fine-toothed comb I want to scrape specks of dandruff I find, then blow gently.

With the forked comb I want to part your hair this way and that way, expose your scalp, letting it breathe.

Come sit, it’s time to play with your hair:
twist sections;
braid others;
tie a few;
adorn some with beads;
and others with those shells we picked on that day it all began.
© Makhosazana Xaba
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14 voices:

Vesper said...

i love your blog and i've added you to my blogroll!

+*-s-t-e-f-f-*+ said...

Hi, Steffi here. Is your blog about poems?? Really interesting.

www.articlesbysteffi.blogspot.com

Pat Paulk said...

This is beautiful, romantic and just plain well written!!

Poetry by Kai said...

this blog is wonderful...
& the poem is wonderfully sweet...

African girl, American world said...

I love this piece!
I don't know if it is because I have just done my hair or what but I love it!!!!

getzapped said...

Sensuous, intimately playful. Sweet poem. Thank you.

Lyrically speaking said...

this is a very passionate piece, i really like it

chiefbiscuit said...

Hair seems to be a bit of a theme in my 'blogger world' lately - this is one of the more beautiful poems I have read on the subject. Sensual and detailed.

Robin said...

This one seems familiar. Have you posted it before? It is quite lovely. Reminds me of being a young mother to my daughters, delighting in their care, and also being my mother's daughter.

susan said...

beautiful. intimate. braiding, grooming the act is an intimate act done with love. I've seen this scene played out in similar ways across genres and cultures. Thanks for sharing this.

paisley said...

beautiful.. how very loving to spend such personal time with someone.. not rushing off or making sure it is done with out ever playing an active part...

Rethabile said...

Paisley,
The simplicity of this piece is what I wish I could achieve.

Greyscale Territory said...

Sharing personal grooming is such an intimate form of loving.

Gemma

Rob Kistner said...

Greetings Rethabile – Just came by to say hi …come by for visit or just to say hello.
…rob