3 December 2006

GRACE
(by Forrest Hamer)


This air is flooded with her. I am a boy again, and my mother
and I lie on wet grass, laughing. She startles, turns to
marigolds at my side, saying beautiful, and I can see the red
there is in them.

When she would fall into her thoughts, we'd look for what
distracted her from us.

My mother's gone again as suddenly as ever and, seven months
after the funeral, I go dancing. I am becoming grateful.
Breathing, thinking, marigolds.
© Forrest Hamer
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10 voices:

Xavier said...

So very tender. So very bitter-SWEET. Like my friend... [sigh]

Rethabile said...

I discovered this voice not so long ago, and liked the sound of it. It never ceases to amaze me how many good writers there are out there...

Lyrically speaking said...

I LOVE this piece, especially how you speak of your mother

getzapped said...

xavier took the words right out of my mouth -"so very tender". Hits home as I found out my mother is having heart problems, scary but real....

Rethabile said...

I'm sorry to hear that, getzapped. May she get well soon.

Pod said...

that is just lovely. thanks for visiting my site. i have some lyrical friends. i shall tell them of you

getzapped said...

rethabile- I am staying positive and not jummping to conclusions.

Peace~

Rethabile said...

getzapped,
Jumping to conclusions is bad. Don't. Stay strong.

Carol Anne said...

"Grace" makes me want to cry. Great poem.

paisley said...

and I can see the red
there is in them.

the innocence and intimacy of tis world as seen thru the graceful eyes of a child brings one to tears....