EASY SKANKING
(by Geoffrey Philp)
all saturday evenings
should be like this, caressing
your thigh while reading neruda
with his odes to matilde's arms,
breasts, hair--everything about her
that made him
a part of this bountiful earth--
lilies, onions, avocados--that fed
his poetry the way
rain washes the dumb cane with desire
or banyans break through asphalt--
this is the nirvana that the buddha
with his bald monks and tiresome sutras
never knew or else he'd never have left
his palace and longing bride--
the supple feel of your leg in my hands
for which i'd spin the wheel of karma
a thousand lifetimes, more
© Geoffrey Philp





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I've enjoyed catching up on your latest posts Rethabile. Some thought-provoking material as always. Spiced with intelligent, beautiful poems such as Derek Walcott's. I especially enjoyed the eight random facts about you - things I always wanted to know but was afraid to ask!
I would love to try the Jesus quiz out at work - where children under 12 abound - but alas it may result in me being hauled before the authorities as having carried out a non PC act! (I only half jest ... ) Personally I think Jesus did look like the Semite proto-type pictured and that he was a short guy - only about five feet tall, if that. Not at all the tall, Aryan, blond, hippie-guy at all. What a fiction that is.
Chiefbiscuit,
Always good to catch you here. I wouldn't want you to get into trouble asking kids "religious" questions. That is a good description you give of what I think Jesus looked like. Cheers
What a luscious choice poem...very evocative of Neruda's lovely sensual qualities! Nice picking, Mr. R.!
How I'd love to see the poem written after love's grass-fire has burnt down to ash, at the moment when the poet realizes the wheel of karma took him at his word...
:-)
Lori,
"How I'd love to see the poem written after love's grass-fire has burnt down to ash, at the moment when the poet realizes the wheel of karma took him at his word..."
What a thrill for all of us if the poet took you at your word!
This is a nice one from Geoffrey. It's very passionate and it says so much in a subtle, yet powerful way. Bravo!
Enjoy your weekend, ntate. By the way, your sister is doing well in RSA. She is enjoying the sights, taste and sounds of the township. Khotso~
Stephen,
Yes indeed. Tomorrow is a Saturday, and tomorrow night it'll be thinking of this poem, or reading it. Heck, it's becoming a ritual.
I'm glad ausi is having a swell time at home. One more month for me...
Have a good weekend, too...
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