16 March 2008

THE SONG OF SUNRISE
(by Oswald Mbuyiseni Mtshali)

The sword of daybreak
snips the shroud
of the night from the sky,
and the morning
peeps through the blankets
like a baby rising
from its cot
to listen to the
peal of the bell.

Arise! Arise!
All Workers!
To work! To work!
You must go!

Buses rumble,
Trains rattle,
Taxis hoot.

I shuffle in the queue
with feet that patter
on the station platform,
and stumble into the coach
that squeezes me like a lemon
of all the juice of my life.
© Oswald Mbuyiseni Mtshali


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8 voices:

Kai C. said...

lovely

Rethabile said...

Thanks, on behalf of Mbuyiseni.

AnnieElf said...

No sooner did I fall in love with that first sentence than I just fell in love with this whole portrait of early morning life. It seems that some things, at least, are the same all over the world.

Rethabile said...

I think there's stuff we can't get around, wherever we are in the world. And BTW, that first sentence did me in, too.

dom said...

Nice poem :)
I have a blog site with a "Flag counter" which collates visits from Bloggers in other countries; I am up to 185! But sadly missing Lesotho.

Please visit my site :)

http://domsweirdnews.blogspot.com

Rethabile said...

dom,
I'm a Mosotho blogging from France, where I live. So the only flag I can give you is the French one, which you have lots of already.
Best
Rethabile

gel (Emerald Eyes) said...

Enchanting opening- simply gorgeous writing. Mtshali contrasts this in his closing so well. As alway, thank you for sharing more S. African poets.

(I'm not sure if I told you that a woman in my real life book group was born in South Africa? None of the rest of us are from there nor have we visited the country. She is a wealth of information. Upon her recommendation we read the Nonfiction Book A White Boy in Africa by Peter Goodwin. She captivates us with history, knowledge, and experience).

I love how you introduce us to other writers in addition to your own well-written poetry.

Greyscale Territory said...

Ritual of an early morning, beginning a working day, certainly saps the creative juices. I have fought that intrusion all my life.
(At least in my mind!) But on the outside, I still perform the same rituals and secretly write poetry by night.

Gemma